Friday, 16 March 2018

I am poem
I Am Poem
(1) I am Deeny
I am fun and funny
I wonder if i can touch the clouds
I hear The bird chirping
I see my dads nana
I want a laptop with a mouse
(2) I am Deeny
I pretend to be the queen
I feel my nana
touch the heart off my family
I worry when my siblings get hurt I cry when someone dies
I am awesome
(3) I understand things people tell me
I say believe in god
I dream big
I try my best at work
I hope for a happy life
I am Deeny

1 comment:

  1. Hi Denny,
    I am Noah from St Patricks school in Greymouth, I like how you try your best at work and how you hope for a happy life but maybe next time you could revise and edit but other than that it was really good.

    Blog ya later.